@jerrytron, it works ! That's awesome. I am curious, is the appended passage meant to ask to continue or just print out ? I know some of the built in stories have a 'Press any button to continue' when some passages are too long.
I don't mind either way, but I think the 'continue' option would stop people from thinking there is too much to read.
As for the bug... Woohoo ! The rhyme wasn't set to fit into a special size. I just wrote it out and that's how it ended up. It's good to see it picked up early on though, but then that's one more thing to fix...
The 'save' bug I've posted may not be related to saving after all. I've turned autosave off, and added around 12 passages last night, but towards the end the app virtually stopped. When it slowed to taking 15 seconds per character to display, I tried to save and the app...stopped part way through saving (with the button stuck in a ghosted state). It didn't save the last passage when I reloaded the app and the story.
I might PM you my story @jerrytron, so you can see how slow it is with 127 passages.
I'll also update the build thread with the most recent dev build.